I want to write about the beginning, the first few pages before the table of contents, with the photo of a protester in Oakland who has #BlackLivesMatter underlined on their cheek. It's taken close to the protester's face, calling the reader in. Following this, the dedication "To all those who have died because of the color of their skin", rings with tragic history and losses alongside the more current photo in action with a hashtag in focus. The text of the dedication itself is large and small and then largest, and my breath sort of came and went with that expansion. So, the beginning of this book interfaces with the reader really powerfully as a moment to experience. To me, the photos and documents alongside or in between poems solidify this experience by creating pauses. These pauses allowed for words, sounds, emotions, textures, and voices to have a moment to sink in to my brain and body.
One way the anthology allows for the stories in each poem to expand beyond their specific references is by putting the author bios right alongside their work. This to me, is one really concrete way that all the poems seem to deal with the past and present and with nonlinear inheritances -- themes that I noticed in many of the poems were with parents and children, with history and protest as a kind of then and now like the part of the title, "from Emmet Till to Trayvon Martin". And still, just like Camille Dungy's memorable "Half the time I can't tell my experiences apart from the ghosts'" (44). Many of the authors write about their parents, their grandparents, their educational histories and their personal histories before their poetry. Also, Philip Cushway writes "It was 2013 when I started this book and a new iteration of the Civil Rights Movement was taking place. From the streets of Ferguson, Cleveland, Baltimore and across the country, young people marched, questioning and confronting the continued murders of black youth. Oscar Grant, Tamir Rice, and Trayvon Martin became today's Emmet Till" (Preface). So stories are linked from past to present, but there's a certain heavy space in the reading. Again, I got this from the extra-textual materials in the beginning of the book, the document on page 2, "A Partial List of Racial Murders from 1963-1965" and then a 50 year space before the list of 2012-2015. The pause between the two incomplete records hold gravity and frames what comes next, poetry that is a process, poetry that is introspective, and poetry that runs through Black histories, narratives, and lives.
So the poem that I read the closest was Wanda Coleman's "Emmet Till". There are methods she uses and conventions she ignores that I found myself wondering about, especially the alphabetized river names. Why are some capitalized and some aren't? With that said, what do the capitalized words and not capitalized words do in this poem? I found the list of river names both mournful like flowing water, or whispers, or moments of silence between brutality and horror, but also filled with the energy of repetition. The beginning of section 4 is a similar instance, "at my mouth forking", the italicized "voice" goes on to say "murder" and "on that third day/he rose". I had to take a step away from reading at this point, but I'm still left trying to figure out why close reading this poem feels like there are strong dualities, or things in pairs, that happen alongside each other? Like, there seems to be an urgency to move in the moving river water and in the rain "spill tears/nimbus threatening downpour/sweetwater culls into its soulplain" (24), but then also the sinking and seeping water, "works its way underground/scarred landscape veined by rage/sanctified waters flow" (22).
Molly, the opening photograph in Oakland was very chilling for me as well given that we are reading text around protest poetry in Oakland, home of the Black Panther Party. I think adds another layer of chills to this works and makes it impossible to ignore how real these stories are, how important this work is and how it moves across time and across the country.
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My reaction was similar - one part hopeless that nothing has changed and the other part invigorated to keep unveiling these truths because the evidence is here plain as day.
But aside from how we feel about the poem, I appreciate in your analysis that you examined the actual artwork itself. Noticing the various changes in format in Coleman's "Emmett Till" is important because it makes you want to interact with the poems deeper to see what they really mean, especially given the essays of the author alongside them. It makes the experience and understanding of the work more intimate.
I was thinking a lot about the capitalization/conventions in "Emmett Till" as well. I wasn't sure why certain place names were capitalized at the beginning when most of them (and most of the words) were not. The lowercase letters also make it even more noticeable when Coleman does capitalize Emmett Till's name and further emphasizes her reclaiming of his humanity. The lowercase letters feel more understated somehow, while the capitals stand out and force the reader to pause briefly.
ReplyDeleteThis also makes me think about the depth of knowledge and backstory integrated into that poem and so many of the others, which seems to be what you're saying, too, Brea. The poem forces readers to come in with prior knowledge or seek out information about these places and their significance to better understand the greater picture Coleman is painting. The work around the poem of researching and finding out more about these places further highlights the complex, layered nature of events like Emmett Till's murder and the reverberations that continue to be felt.
This is a great entry Rose, it covers content, craft and intention. I appreciate how you analyze the outlay of the work from the book to the poem. Looking at the rivers historically, may give us some insight into to the cases. I also appreciate your examination of the lines and questioning the ending. Perhaps one of the commenters will engage?
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