LaTasha N. Nevada Diggs’ instrument is encoded language Her first poem who you callin’ a jinx (after mista popo) put me and anyone reading
it on notice, this poet is loud and won’t back down or shut up for nobody. It’s almost a spoken word piece the way it
lays on the page. The words and the
attitude wring into the work defiance and indignation. By shaving words and using near sounding
words that rhyme like “Hater-aid” she makes language her servant. Slant rhymes like Aladdin’s bottle with
laughable cannibal are unexpected and fly.
(I guess the word now is dope but I ain’t trying to front.)
She really made me work for her poems. There’s a level an outsider like myself has
to decode if I want to experience these poems.
To Diggs, it’s irrelevant if someone who’s not all the way down doesn’t
get it. These poems are for her inside
fellow family members of culture and there’s no apology. There’s no need. Get it or bless it and move on. Her work feels like the
deliberate embrace of a poet ensconced deeply in her oeuvre groove. gamin’
gabby made me read out loud and it brought more awareness of the poems in
through an experience of the language heard.
It took me a couple of tries to understand the last poem of the four in gamin’ gabby was a re-rendering of the
first of the four.
Making me work just as hard at decoding is the graphic
poetry of Douglas Kearney. I didn’t know
one could control text to that degree to make it do the work of fooling a
listener/reader into thinking they might know a direction the poem is heading
in – the sky? – only to be shoved back into the green groin of Liberty. But hey, who loves ya? America. Love, America. I could smell the scratch we’re all after in
this country and we have to do a level of bending and bedding to get paid. It’s wrapped in the phonetics of beatboxing
and that too made speaking it aloud part of my understanding. In Kearney’s poems, text is the instrument bent
to sound through size manipulations among the words framed and rebuilt to suit
the noise level.
What does Danez Smith do with the essay prose form? He claims a place in space for the difference
he’s tired, tired, tired of having to explain, navigate, negotiate to
survive. He’s done with it and he lets
Amiri Baraka and James Baldwin bring him the waters to turn the soil into the
good wet earth that is his and his people’s color. His work was the most emotional I read. Because the writing doesn’t hit like a fist,
more like a plea to heaven for release so filled with longing it makes me join
his chorus in support.
The poets in Coiled Serpent were all cleanly wrought
pieces, each with a distinct representation of an instrument. For William Archila, it’s perfectly
visualized metaphors for Mingus’s bass, including one description of “Chinese
acrobats bubbling.” Anaid Carreno rides
the tongue of the snake to declare her freedom from an America that shackled
and labeled her. It is the taut
retelling of an encounter with a homeless man by Anthony A. Lee that silenced
me into a reverie of grace and awe. His
precision with the poem, the work on the page, the reclamation of Christian
lessons to treat everyone as his brother as the Christ would have, the holding
of accountability to our fellow kin on this planet, “the least of these” that
made me bow my own head in praise. How
different is that man who was dry but relapsed?
Is he really the other, or are we when we refuse to see?
I enjoyed your take on the poems - the symbolism of the serpent really stuck with me in Carreno's poems. So much history is behind the serpent, and within the context of the poem, you can really see the different directions a reader can take the appearance and comparison of the serpent. This poem was full of so much power that it really feels like a perfect fit..I especially agree with your take on the serpent and freedom.
ReplyDeleteI like your point (and the way you said it) about Digg's poetry putting the reader 'on notice'. Her poems don't ever let the reader rest. They are High Energy in a way I didn't know poetry could be.
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